My original topic was “You vs. the World.” It is still a work in progress, but I think as of now I want to change it to “The Pressures of Facing the World Alone.” I think that I needed to make it a little more informative in order to pull my readers in a little more. Also, I just made up the title on the spot so it wasn’t going to be a keeper. I guess in this blog we are supposed to have an introduction or a start to an introduction, so I guess I will include my introduction, which is defiantly a work in progress.
College, or an untamed jungle, can you survive the pressures? Once you leave home and enter the wild world of college, it basically turns into a fight: you against the world. Let me tell you, my friend, it does not get any easier from here on out and the pressures, oh man, do they come on strong. Don’t worry, because you have been set out into the world with the morals and values that your parents have given you. But, without them holding your hand and telling you right versus wrong, do you think you are strong enough to become your own leader? I think so! So before I start, let’s get one thing straight, I am NOT by any means here to lecture you, but what I want to do is inspire you to take a stand. Now, before you freak out, it is okay to be on your own and yes majority of you will encounter the pressures of college, your parents, and your peers, but it is all up to you to be your own leader. Now note for later, the people you surround yourself with are going have the most influence in your life.
I like yout topic. I think people truely need to stand up and prepare for the pressures of college but they need to know that they are not alone. As your title is a work in project, so is mine. I typically write my title last, after my whole paper is written to be sure that it makes the most sense. I wouldn't blame you for changing you title later, I will probably do the same.
ReplyDeleteThanks I know I want people to know that you do not have to be alone when facing the pressures of college! and yeah I usually do the same as you! thats why my title is horrible now and makes no sense
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